Thursday, January 29, 2009

Only Nixon could go to China; only Rachel Swarns could mention Michelle's purple power suit

I was perusing The Caucus today, and came across this subtly tone-deaf bit of writing:
Michelle Obama stepped into the public-policy spotlight as first lady for the first time on Thursday, hailing a new law that will give women greater power to challenge sex discrimination in the workplace.

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Mrs. Obama’s comments marked her first public appearance since she moved into the White House with her family last week. She stood in a purple power suit alongside Lilly M. Ledbetter, a supervisor at a Goodyear Tire and Rubber Company plant in Alabama.
My first thought was that if you're talking about Michelle Obama's support of anti-sex discrimination legislation then you probably don't want to go out of your way to mention what she happens to be wearing. But then I noticed that the author of the post was a lady, so I thought, "Well that's okay then."

And, yes, this blog will now be devoted entirely to nitpicking the writing at the NYT. Because, you know, I'm in a position to make those criticisms.

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